Who is the audience for your essay? The audience for my essay is the people that are going to vote for our politicians that want to cut this program.
Can the audience be swayed by your claim and reasons? Why or why not? Yes I hope so. I presented logical facts that were backed up with numbers that proved that the Golden Heart Project was working and that the detoxification system was working at least better than nothing at all
What value do your sources have to your audience? They have a lot of value as they were put out not only by the government proving that they worked but they were a police officer, talking about the difference that he saw, a Doctor stating the problems he saw in the ER before the system. And nurses who have seen the good and the bad of this system.
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What are talking about? What the heck is "the program", and what system are you referring to? It is very confusing. You would be better off answering your mother's email (like your wife) than posting confusing lesson responses from your class.
Mom, I think someone has taken my brother and replaced him with this freak.......perhaps we should alert his wife? Oh no, maybe they took her and the kids too. Hey.............. do you think the kidnapper will send me the baby to raise as my own?
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